Sam,
I like your thesis. I think it's great! You clearly state your point and I know exactly what your paper is going to be about from reading it. I also think that the evidence you are deciding to use with help prove your arguments. I think it's helpful that you have various sources to refer to.
Michelle,
I think your thesis is much better now especially after you changed it. I think that the sources/evidence you will be using will help you to write this paper. For the second argument you could also use Feed as a source for evidence. There are a couple of parts in the book where it shows how the character conform due to their feeds.
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